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Templates

First message to a client in a messaging app: templates for every case

The first message decides whether you get a reply or silence. The principle is simple: say who you are, say why you are writing, and ask one easy question. No long introductions, no list of services. Here are seven versions for different situations.

After a request or a call

Replying to a request

Hi {Name}, this is {your name}. You left a request about {topic}. Is now a good moment for a quick chat, or would you prefer I write later?

Fits when: in the first minutes after the request, while the person still remembers it.

After a phone call

Hi {Name}, it’s {your name}. We just spoke on the phone. I’m writing so everything stays at hand: you asked about {topic}. What would you most like to clarify?

Fits when: right after the conversation, so the chat continues the call.

When you could not reach them

Hi {Name}. I tried to call you about {topic}. Tell me when it suits you to talk and I’ll call you myself.

Fits when: two or three missed calls and no pickup.

By referral

Through a mutual contact

Hi {Name}. {Who} recommended you and said {topic} might interest you. If it doesn’t, I apologize for the interruption.

Fits when: the person who referred you allowed you to use their name.

Without pressure

Good afternoon, {Name}. I’m {your name}. Your contact was passed to me regarding {topic}. I’ll explain in two sentences and you decide whether it’s relevant.

Fits when: the person is not expecting you and needs a respectful nudge.

To a warm contact

Recalling a meeting

Hi {Name}. We met at {event} and I promised to write. How are things with {topic}? If it suits you, I can tell you what’s new on our side.

Fits when: you have met, but it was a while ago or only briefly.

Returning to the conversation

Hi {Name}. It’s been a while. I remembered {topic} and thought of you. Do you have a minute?

Fits when: the person already knows you and is not a stranger.

What not to write

  • Long introductions of your company or lists of everything you can do.
  • “Hello, I would like to offer you a unique…” and other stock openers.
  • Several questions in one message: the person answers one, and the rest are lost.
  • Messages at night. A first contact at a sensible hour shows respect.

A short first message gets read. A long one gets postponed and forgotten.

Why it works